Image Choices
I really like the images that you have used and I also like how the one on the left on the page as it looks like she is sitting on the edge of the paper.
I really like the images that you have used and I also like how the one on the left on the page as it looks like she is sitting on the edge of the paper.
Title and Who it
was by
I like the title but I think that it could be better in a darker colour.
I like the title but I think that it could be better in a darker colour.
Content
The contents of the article really brings out the techno side of yuor magazine.
The contents of the article really brings out the techno side of yuor magazine.
Colour Template
Its good that you have kept the same colour scheme and not added another colour like what you were thinking of ealier as not doing this helps it to fit in with other magazine.
Its good that you have kept the same colour scheme and not added another colour like what you were thinking of ealier as not doing this helps it to fit in with other magazine.
Other Design Choices
I like how you have reused the ripped paper idea that you used on the contents page and the then used the idea again when you ripped the image so that it focuses on the person in the image.
I like how you have reused the ripped paper idea that you used on the contents page and the then used the idea again when you ripped the image so that it focuses on the person in the image.
Improvements
- The title could do with being darker.
- And you need to put in the page numbers, I that it will look really good it you make then the darker blue to.
- The title could do with being darker.
- And you need to put in the page numbers, I that it will look really good it you make then the darker blue to.
reviewed by
Jessica Boxal
Jessica Boxal
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