Feed Back for Double Page Spread Person 1

Image Choices

I really like all of the images that you have chosen to use, and they all fit your genre very well. And I also like how the one on the right hand side at the bottom looks like it has been ripped out of it’s own photo.

Title and Who it was by

I like how the colours used for your title and who it is by reflecting how it was done on the contents page, this helps to tie the double paged spread into the magazine.

Article

I like how the first paragraph of the article goes all the way across the left hand page.

Colour Template

I really like how you have not used to many colours and how they are the same all the way through. I also like how all the colours that are used all link together and link through out the magazine. But the background colour and the light blue colour that was used make it a little hard to read.

Other Design Choices
I like how the you have used effects on the images so they look like they are photos that you could pick up of the page. I also like the way that you have pu them so they look like you have just dropped them onto the page.

Improvements

- I think that it could look better if you didn't have the tap holding down the photos, it's clear way you have done it that way as it links in with the contents page but still, you might get on better if you didn't. But even then you have linked to the rest of the magazine in some other places so you don't really need the tap there for the page to fit in.

- Going back to what I said about the background colour and the light blue colour being to near a colour, if you make the background darker then it should fit with the genre and everything and it will make it easier to read to.

reviewed by
Megan George