Feed Back for Contents Page Person 3

Image Choices

I like how the images are spread out over the right side and bottom of the page. I also like how they are over lapping slightly.

Masthead in the corner and the Title of the page
I like how you have copied the masthead onto the contents page, and how you have made it small enough so it is not as big and bold as on the cover but it is still big enough so that you see it and so that it makes an in packed on the page.

Content Lines

I like them but I thing that you would be able to make their column thinner and add some contents lines in their own shapes, like what you did on the cover for the main cover line.

Colour Template

I like the way that you have kept the colours the same, but have used different effects so that they stand out differently.

Improvements

- Push the date and the title over a little bit so they are not on the rip of the paper.

- Make the contents line's column thinner.

reviewed by
Jessica Boxal