Feed Back for Contents Page Person 1

Image Choices
I like the images that you have used as they show different sides to the genre focus, for example the images for page 58 and 193 show more of the Techno side of the magazine. but the images for 167 and 214 show the Gothic side. but I also like how image 125 shows the ground in between the two genres.

Masthead in the corner and the Title of the page
I like how a photo of the cover is small and in the corner of the contents page, because it helps a lot if a friend just hands you the magazine open at the contents page, and then asks you if you have read it. Because the cover  is the the easiest to remember. I love the fonts that you have used with both the title and the masthead.

And I really like the contrast between the white of the title and the deep black of the ripped pice of paper.

Content Lines

I like the way that you have used most of the colours of the colour scheme to write them.

Colour Template

I really like the colour scheme of the magazine and I also liked how you used the light blue in the middle of the background and it faded out into the dark blue of the colour scheme.

Other Design Choices
I really like the ripped piece of black paper, it just adds to the magazine.

Improvements
- Have more article titles and make them look more like they are in a column.
- Make the numbers clearer.

reviewed by
Harry Lynch-Bowers